Reviewing your music =8-/

Started by Joji, Apr 12, 2024, 05:33 PM

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Joji

Post one of your own tracks/WIPs for feedback from a legend.. (LIMITED TIME OFFER)  8)
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    covetslit

    Uhhhh hey, does anyone wanna come over to my house?
    Oh I forgot you can't! You can't come to my house! Because no one can ever come to my house because I live in the middle place between *the World and Time.
    ... I'm just kidding guys, I live in the old city of Chicago! Meep Moop Mreaow.

    Joji

    Quote from: covetslit on Apr 16, 2024, 04:43 PM
    https://open.spotify.com/artist/7IXnu4NL5Xa0fkQwBjVW0n?si=jZbZD5dQRCmSzc1fV-Lz0Q

    wtv song u want  ;D

    I like your style! I listened to the first 5 songs that appeared on your spotify page, and I think my favorite was definitely the winter lovers. The way you mixed it makes it sound enclosed but also sort of intimate, like I'm listening to it through a speaker in a dark room, even while using headphones. I wish they were longer tbh. Good work ;)
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      fishpaste

      ok
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        covetslit

        Quote from: Joji on Apr 16, 2024, 07:50 PM
        Quote from: covetslit on Apr 16, 2024, 04:43 PM
        https://open.spotify.com/artist/7IXnu4NL5Xa0fkQwBjVW0n?si=jZbZD5dQRCmSzc1fV-Lz0Q

        wtv song u want  ;D

        I like your style! I listened to the first 5 songs that appeared on your spotify page, and I think my favorite was definitely the winter lovers. The way you mixed it makes it sound enclosed but also sort of intimate, like I'm listening to it through a speaker in a dark room, even while using headphones. I wish they were longer tbh. Good work ;)
        tysm ^^ and im working on making them longer
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          yakkpakk

          Should I Just Scrap This Beat This One IS Conflicting Me Thanks

          https://sndup.net/k4hr/d
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            Joji

            Quote from: yakkpakk on Apr 16, 2024, 08:10 PMShould I Just Scrap This Beat This One IS Conflicting Me Thanks

            https://sndup.net/k4hr/d

            NO!

            The vibe on this one is potent. With a few tweaks, it could make for an effective backdrop for some lyrics with a personal or confessional tone to them. If I had to give some advice on how to improve it, maybe bring the melody closer to the forefront and give it a little bit more presence in the mid range. I get the feeling that some looped vocal sampling (maybe something casual/conversational) might add a bit to the overall sound if implemented correctly. I don't think it's worth scrapping at all :)
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              yakkpakk

              Quote from: Joji on Apr 16, 2024, 09:33 PM
              Quote from: yakkpakk on Apr 16, 2024, 08:10 PMShould I Just Scrap This Beat This One IS Conflicting Me Thanks

              https://sndup.net/k4hr/d

              NO!

              The vibe on this one is potent. With a few tweaks, it could make for an effective backdrop for some lyrics with a personal or confessional tone to them. If I had to give some advice on how to improve it, maybe bring the melody closer to the forefront and give it a little bit more presence in the mid range. I get the feeling that some looped vocal sampling (maybe something casual/conversational) might add a bit to the overall sound if implemented correctly. I don't think it's worth scrapping at all :)

              Thank U My Goat
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